My friends Dislike my poetry …?
My friends like my poems to say, it is hard to read, it has no structure and has no rhythm. This is a poem I showed them called "She", which I wrote, which she did not like … Should I just give up poetry ..? It has a blue sheet for a sea of intervention by a blanket we call the country the agony Sloth Waking the sight of mankind by a sky-blue She turns abyss, which is surrounded by a giant fish I can hear cries on cloudless days dreamily. It obeys the laws better than we are traveling through the void behind Her tides at our feet your cold air the Ears. She lands, which are of a patchwork quilt many colors dark woods such as curtains in the night like upright pillows Hills. It is the pearl of our system and has already before our birth, it is abundant with life your name is called Earth.
Poetry need no structure or rhythm. Content, images and metaphors can equally be important. Rhythm is * usually * used to add "unit" or "flow", a poem. And this poem already unity and flow. The rhythm and structure in this poem as correct spelling in a text: If you do not notice it, you know, it's done right. Rhythm may cause unusual and exciting, but it need not be. Your Poetry was read perfectly clear. I do not like poetry that is either too simple or too complicated to sell, and is somewhere in the middle. It is clear and can not be misunderstood be. I thought that the first and the third verse was particularly good. I thought that was a woman, and I was really impressed by the Mother Earth imagery. So when I realized it was the topic, I was a little disappointed: P but you obviously have a way with words. Keep writing about things that you find interesting;)
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